Stephen Hawking - disabled comic

I loved drawing and making Stephen Hawking for Blue Water but the lettering/script and my not leaving enough space didn't make much of a finished readable comic. Here's some of the pages, the worst being the one where the lettering is right over the hands in the middle of the page. I'm very proud of the art, specifically a boat rowing page - I insisted on inking this one because of how the others had gone. I'm pretty sure most comic shops don't carry Tidal wave as they are now called because of their reputation for books like this and not paying their artists (also like this) but I found these floating around the web and it's almost half the issue so I figured I'd post my learning experience.